a metaphor, or an observational poem.

a metaphor, or an observational poem.

brown white and orange small bird perched on wood near pine tree leaf
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am I just a bird
searching through
fields of grass
hoping for
a single worm

notes: all about the rise and fall of the syllables, well, at least to me, one of those I call “haiku-feel”, you know, not haiku in the strict sense, sometimes simple is simple…. seems reasonable, at least to this mind…

3 thoughts on “a metaphor, or an observational poem.

      1. I agree! Haiku is a wonderfully condensed poem, centring around a vivid symbol, and you’ve captured this feeling beautifully! It’s always inspiring to see how authors challenge conventions. 😉

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