haiku style, so, not haiku

haiku style, so, not haiku

black wooden bench on green grass
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an unremarkable
rainy day
the pond
in the park
over there
a lone figure
sits on the bench
centered
I can not read
their story from here
so I move on

notes… I say it every time I write a piece like this, haiku is great as a script, I don’t like the restraint but I love the feel, intent and compaction, no bones to throw @ those who are haiku advocates, Basho is amazing, he embodied his poems, but I am not Basho, so interpret for yourself.

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