the carousel

the carousel

in flashing bulbs of light
the prancing pretty ponies
enveloped in vertigo silk

that circular song
can not focus on a point
in this orbit, I am bound

perpetual motion-
steals my breath-
this carnival, has teeth!

(edit: just now after posting…)

among glaring pulsing bulbs
those prancing pretty ponies
enveloped in vertigo silks
hand painted, chipped from age
white teeth grin wide

that circular song
on and on
can not focus on a single point
as the closed loop is sewn
in this orbit, I am bound

perpetual motion-
up ! and the down-
steals my breath-
this carnival,
(fear now)
this carnival…
has teeth!

notes: this one started out as an exercise in Haiku (5/7/5).. and then went somewhere else, much like Mr. Bungle this defies the norm of the genre but respects the core of it… well, at least that was the intention… I was thinking about how out of control my mind goes when wrapped up in the maelstrom of work.. did I seek out this chaos or am I just a fish biting the baited hook? with my age and experience I should not be so easily deceived… I think… but … it is a struggle, to know you are on a ride and hop off to sit on the picnic bench for a minute… and just breathe, you are not in charge of the world, the entire world is not crumbling, perspective and a deep breath goes a long way…

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